The way we cry defines us,
the size and weight of our tears.
If crying softly in summer rain
or in thunder shout out fears.
Like foam upon an ocean’s wave
are tears upon wet cheeks.
Like silent words they enchant us
when mercury-like they speak.
Many man’s mountain may crumble,
wild wars wanderers waylay.
But hold her close as she stumbles
and listen to what her tears say.
True pearls are not made of oysters
no, pearls come only from hearts!
Like beads on silver threads they are
and tell us when loneliness starts.
This is my entry for Thursday Poets Rally Week 51.
I was awarded the Perfect Poet Award for my participation in the Thursday Poets Rally Week 51.
Well written CC.
True pearls are not made of oysters
no, pearls come only from hearts!
Just beautiful! Heart-felt!
I got inspired from a line I saw whirling by somewhere about tears and crying… And this came to me. *blushing* So glad you like it, it means a lot to me to have you read and comment.
I really enjoyed this. It came at a time when tears are familiar friends to me. Thank you
Sad to hear of that friendship (I know it well), but I am glad you enjoyed the piece. *big hugs*
My tears are but a small indication, an inkling, a leaking, of the oceans that well up within me.
I’m with you on this tonight, sister-friend. Nicely written.
*big, big, big hugs*
love it,
wise words, way to go.
Thank you!
Wow, Cissi, this is really good. I am definitely a crier of tears of all emotions, practically everyday. Well done!
Thanks, Gwen! I loved yours too! LIke the way you combined knowledge with poetry. You are a real master! *smile*
Beautiful, CC! Love the sentiment and you put it together well!
My entry: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/07/cannonball-3/
Oh, have to go take a look at that! Cannonball 3 makes me think of Burt Reynolds and fast cars so very curious to see what you’ve been up to! *smile* Thank you for reading and commenting!
Beautiful imagery.
Here is my entry:
http://jackedwardspoetry.blogspot.com/2011/09/scribbles.html
Thank you! Glad you liked it!
the opening lines instantly make one smile, true talent, stunning imagery.
Thank you, Morning! Great to see you read and comment! Honoured you liked it!
love the rhythm cc.. my entry.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2011/01/30/lines/
I saw the Lines one! Beautiful! So clean and simple… Uncluttered! I really liked it! Thank you for reading! *smile*
You keep us smiling from the first line on it is a great poem and can not wait to read more in the weeks to come from you
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/08/the-crimson-witch/
masterful piece of poetry…enjoyed every word.
thanks.
Wow, thank you! Making me blush here… *smile*
Vert interesting take on tears! Well written.
Thank you, Raven! *smile*
Very beautiful composition and the extent of pain so it tells..
Alcina
Thank you Alcina! I’m glad you liked it!
Well…awesome…hmmmmm…let me re-read it again. I’ll be right back.
would I like to read more …of what you are saying. Crossing my fingers that there is a lesson learned; There, in that creative genius of you’re life, will spill more of this wonderful read.
I’m back. Awesome! Each “stanza” begs for more definition but does want an ending with resolution, maybe…It is wonderful as it stands, but, boy
ZQ
Thank you sooooo much! *blushing* I will look at this more at a later stage, but right now I’m just going to re-read your comment and savour the praise!
A wonderfully written poem! And the photo is lovely as well. Are you a photographer/poet? I am starting a new challenge called A Picture Speaks. I want to invite you to join. It is especially for photo/poets. I hope you’ll stop by.
Unfortunately I mostly rely on others for the photographs (though I have used my own amateur pictures occasionally), but I will absolutely stop by and have a look. And thank you for the kind words!
I love this, wonderfully written and made me think of the tears in my life and of those around me. Powerful stuff!
Thank you very much! I’m glad you enjoyed it!